We need a motocross track in otaki.
There are so many people with dirt bikes in otaki and people are getting mad about them riding on the beach.
People are getting mad and these people need somewhere to ride.
People on facebook are complaining about kids riding too close to them on the beach and that they need a license to ride. Also, people are riding on the road illegally with no plates or license. This is caused by boredom and if we had a motocross track they would have somewhere to ride.
We need a motocross track to make our beaches and roads safer.
The slide that we got to give us information helped a lot to write this.
Pleased the slide set helped with the writing task, Blake. You have written a clear argument that is well supported with reason. Do take care with capitalisation so as not to distract your reader from your good logic.
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